Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, May 21, 2020
My lock down letter
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hello Ava
ReplyDeleteI loved how you said what you missed most and what you liked most about staying at home .I also liked how you said what you learnt to do. When you said what you liked the most was spending time with my family it remained me when me mum and my sister all had a hug in my mum and dads bed. Maybe next time you could check your spelling. But apart from that your blog is awesome.
Amelia
Hi Ava,
ReplyDeleteI loved reading this letter.
I really enjoyed spending time with you and making lots of memories.
The only suggestion is to check through your spelling before you post.
Great work Ava 😘