Kia ora, and welcome back to my blog
For writing me and my group we had to write about how to care for a cat, how to care for dog etc. I chose to do how to care for a cat! I gathered up some information on cats. I wrote 5 paragraphs about how to care for a cat. I really like cats I have never had a cat as a pet before but my friend has 2, and I go over to her house quite a lot so I know a lot about cats. Hope you enjoy reading about how to care for cat
What is your favourite animal
Hi Ava,
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good peice of writing, is was very funny to read! The issue is that its one word a line, we tried to figure that out maybe we could try harder next time. Maybe next time you should read over your writing on the the blog, at the end you don't have a full stop, and at the end of the question there is no question mark. Over all I think this is a very good peice of writing and I hope you write more like this.
-Lucy
Hi Ava.
ReplyDeleteWow that’s a lot of information about cats 😻
I learnt a lot about cats in this post.
Well done Ava this was really good work, I enjoyed reading this.
My favourite animal is rabbits, i enjoy having our pet rabbit Snowflake.
Check through your work before posting to make sure your punctuation and spelling is all correct.
Keep up the great work x
Nice one Ava. I feel like I know enough now to get our own cat at home! My favourite animal is a Lion. But they would not be very good pets. Just take your time a little to read through the content before you publish it. Cant wait to ready your next piece of work.
ReplyDeleteWell done!