Kia ora, and welcome back to my blog!
For the last 3 weeks we were in lock down. We did online school. For one of our writing tasks we had to chose a text and write a persuasive text about the topic I chose pets should not be allowed at school. our goal was:Vary sentence beginnings, structures and length. Write simple and compound sentences (by using conjunctions). Use some complex sentences. Use simple and compound sentences with a variety of beginnings, lengths and structures. Use some complex sentences to create pace, flow and interest. Use linking words and phrases to link some paragraphs.
I hope you enjoy my writing
Do you think pets should be allowed in school?
In my opinion I think pets should not be allowed in school. Do you really want to be stepping in dog poo?
My first reason is, pets should not be allowed at school because some kids might be really scared of animals. Then the kids might be scared to come to school. I don’t think kids will want to be standing in the middle of the playground and there are dogs running around everywhere.
My second reason is kids might have allergies to a secretan pet. Then the Mum will have to pick their kid up and go to the doctors. And you definitely don't want to go home early. I mean I wouldn't.
Finally my last reason is some pets might get lost and then the kid will be really sad that they lost their pet. I know that the parents will get mad if they find out that their pet got lost.
And that is why I don't think pets should be allowed in school.
Hi Ava I really like your post I love that it has so much details maybe next time a bit more on the interduction.
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