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Friday, May 21, 2021

Sentence Expansion

 Ki ora,

Welcome back to my blog, This week I have been learning about how to expand my sentences. We had to write about a little story including when, were and why. We had to write it about Oscar cried and Oscar had an argument. I really hope you enjoy      


We are learning to expand  our sentences with more detail 


Oscar cried.


When: a few days ago


Where at school in the conner 


Why because he was getting bullied 



 A few days ago Oscar cried in the corner of school because a person was bullying him.


They had an argument.

When: yesterday at 8:43 am


Where at the beach


Why because somebody was talking about him in a mean way

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1 comment:

  1. Leigh GibbardMay 22, 2021 at 9:14 AM

    Nice one Ava, excellent seeing your learning expanding with your sentences.

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